I'm actually not sure it's badly written, but I just don't know the answer to the question. If Madame Michaud were here, she could probably answer this for us right now.
Just to be on the safe side, I don't want to vote against it, because to me it's either perfectly acceptable, or there's a slight potential that it violates one of our four criteria. Would it be okay if we just set this one aside, and then deal with it very briefly once we have the answer to that question?